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I look into your
eyes and see my world
pass by

I won't ever change and
neither will my love
for suicide

I don't know the words
and I don't know the
destinctions between
pain and love
life and loss
but I can see how dark the
world can be without you
you're still so beautiful

You know how much
I care about you
you know how much
you make me feel alive


Everything is
black and white
we're stuck in this
perfect picture,
an image of
how it's suppose to be

I don't know the words
and I don't know the
destinctions between
pain and love
life and loss
but I can see how dark the
world can be without you
you're still so beautiful

I can't take the
pain but I live for you
and I live for
everyone who
knows the pain of loss

I don't understand anything
except for one thing
and I want to give up
but I need to be there
for you,
you've had a fucked
up Life and I
understand why
you want to end it all

even though
I don't know the words
and I don't know the
destinctions between
pain and love
life and loss
but I can see how dark the
world can be without you
you're still so beautiful
Yeah ok maybe this isn't so happy but hey it's lyrical sorta and yet dark, maybe actually iunno what it is but get over it, it's "Wickid" John said it reminded him Of Manson so I but the preveiw
thing as Manson, go figure.
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UrsusAureusHistorias Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2003  Student General Artist
He's your monkey with a mispelled name...:+fav:...
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qxyl Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2003
this is a very good job.
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tia-the-fairy Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2003
wow
this is great!
i love this bit

we're stuck in this
perfect picture


actually i love that whole verse
and the whole poem was great

truely great work:!:
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imyselftheking Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2003
I came up with two conclusions
#1 Your in love with a dude/ette
#2 You love suicide
It better not be #2
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rickets101 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2003
this is really well written
is my monkey in love???
hehehe
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